Story Diologue + Camera Shots

Key: 
Bash - Ali
Flash - Idris
Charlie - Zibanoor
Sebastian - Joe
J(Snitch) - *1 More person needed*


Scene One clothing - The thug will be wearing white shirts untucked and caps and a wooly hat.
The area will look rundown and quiet.

Scene 1 - INT.CLASSROOM(DRAMA).NIGHT

Camera moving from the cafe into the drama class.. (Low angle)

When camera gets into the class it does a (Arc shot) around the person tied up..

Does a (Medium shot) on the Ali as he asks questions to the person tied up *Sebastian*

Bash

Where you keep the money at? *Stretches neck*

Sebastian
(Coughing)

What money?

Sebastian spits on the ground.

Flash

Don't play stupid with us boy, You wan' get slapped up?

Flash clicks his finger.

Bash

This idiot!

Bash punches Sebastian on the body.

Now, how do we talk to your brother.

J(Snitch)

Relax.

Flash 

J, When did you get soft you waste
(Smiles)

J(Snitch)

Forget this all how we gonna split this?

Snitch walks around the room scratching his head. 

Flash 

Split it with you?

(Flash Laughs)

Your getting 10 percent of whatever we get son.

Bash

Its our risk.

Hands behind back walking to the door.

J(Snitch)
 I could get years!

Flash

Its not our fault you came into this lifestyle..
Fades out...

Scene 2 - INT.TOILET.DAY

(Tracking shot) follows Charlie into the toilet,
Snitch enters the toilet.

While in the toilet (High shot) Snitch says everything to Charlie.. for a price.

J(Snitch)

I got something you would want..

J washes his hand.

Charlie

And whats that?

(Serious face)

Charlie washes his hands.

Snitch

Info.
(Smiles)

Charlie

Info on what..

J(Snitch)
I think you know what I'm talking bout'

Charlie

Explodes and says -

Tell me everything.

Looks at Snitch's face and grabs him to the wall.

J(Snitch)

Don't hit me!

Charlie
I'll kill you if you don't say nothing.

Lets go of J.

Snitch
I just want something.

Charlie  

What you want? I want information leading to were they are,  real info leading to my brother.

Snitch

Course..(Pause for few seconds) 20.000 Pounds

Charlie

20Grand?!
(Shocked face)
We come here for a holiday and this happens!

Snitch

Your not gonna get him back if your like this.

Charlie

20Grand for you little thugs from the gutter?

J(Snitch) 

I'm not with them no-more, My names J by the way

Charlie

Your a pathetic snitch J, Follow me.

Scene 3 - INT.CORRIDOR.DAY

(Tracking shot)  Puts the bag in the locker and waits for the snitch to pick it up.

Charlie

Here you go, now speak up.

J(Snitch)

Alright, their names is Flash and Bash, your brothers inside the wooly flats tied up and beaten up, go ask fast as you can.
(Straight face)

Charlie

There's at least 200 houses there, which number is it?

Charlie stretches his arms.

 J(Snitch)

They usually hang around the park by the flats, their both shorter than you and are violent so expect them to get angry quickly.

Scene 4 - INT.OFFICE.NIGHT

Charlie sitting down on a chair.

Charlie

Gotta do this quickly no time to waste

 Writes on a paper several times and scrunches it.

Charlie

I'll just improvise then.

Leaves the house.

Scene 5 - EXT.OUTSIDE-FLAT.DAY

Charlie is hiding behind a fence and waits for them to come out.
*Charlie spots 2 people (Wearing a hat and another person wearing a wooly hat) coming out of the flat and follows them*

Charlie(Loud voice)

Stop!

Flash
Shit, run fam!

(Tracking shot) *A pursuit, the 2 people run away and charlie chases them*

Bash
Follow me now!

Scene 6 - EXT.DEAD-END.DAY 
Thugs wearing the same things as the scene before and Charlie is too.

Bash

(Shocked face)
Who's this!

Flash

The kids brother..

Charlie

That's right.

Bash
How do you know him?

Flash
Hes a legend on the streets..

Charlie

I'm the brother of *Ahem*
The boy you abducted. You know what you got yourself into?

Charlie takes his gloves off.=

Charlie
(Angry face)

Now wheres my brother.

(Low angle)

Flash+Bash 

We don't know!

Charlie punches Bash.

Bash 

Wooly flats! number 64

(High angle)

*Charlie punches Flash*

*Flash groans*

Scene 7 - INT.RUNDOWN-ROOM.DARK

*Sebastian opens the door and enters* *Walks up to Charlie*

Sebastian

Charlie! *Coughs*

Charlie

You okay Lil bro? *Serious face*

Sebastian

I need a doctor now *Sad face*

Charlie

Lets go, i'l take you to a hospital

*Charlie unties Sebastian*

Sebastian

What about them boys?
*Coughs*

(Blood on face)

Charlie

I'll sort them out.
(Smiles)

Sebastian

I wanna go home.

Charlie

Were going soon

*Fades out*

CREDITS.

The End

District 9 Camera Shots

1. Handheld shot - EXT.NARROW ROAD.DAY
2. Medium shot - EXT.ROAD.EVENING
3. Closeup shot - INT.ROOM.DAY?
4. Tracking shot - EXT.OUTSIDE.DAY
5. Aerial shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY
6. Tracking shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY
7. Swish pan - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY
8. Aerial shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY
9. Tracking shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY


1minute of the short movie has been analysed, the bold writing means its in the same place.

Layout Of The Script

It has a lot of detail and its saying whats around the place.
It says what shot its doing at the start of each paragraph.
At the start it says EXT/INT (Inside or outside) and The time of day, DAY/EVENING/NIGHT and Finally the place where its happening so example: INT. HOSPITAL CORRIDOR -- NIGHT.

Character Profiles (Flash)

CHARACTER PROFILE QUESTIONS

• What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname? Idris Khan (Preferred Flash)
• How old is your character throughout the majority of the story? Early 20s
• What is their date of birth? 06/08/1989
• What is their place of birth? Birmingham
• Are they male or female? Male
• Where do they live now? Coventry, West Midlands
• Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed? Single
• Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? No brothers or sisters.
• What is your character's overall health like? Not good, bad from smoking too much.
• What type of personality does your character have? He gets angry quick and would fight anyone.
• What is their Ethnic background and religion? Pakistani and Muslim
• What is their current occupation? He does what ever to get money for example : Selling drugs, Fighting, Robbing people.
• What level of education does your character have? Secondary school education.
• What does your character like or love? He loves money and loves having respect.
• What does your character dislike or hate? Snakes and fake friends.

Character Profiles (Bash)

CHARACTER PROFILE QUESTIONS 

• What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname? Ali Crawn (Preferred Bash)

• How old is your character throughout the majority of the story? Early 20's
• What is their date of birth? 23/08/1990
• What is their place of birth? East London
• Are they male or female? Male
• Where do they live now? Coventry, West Midlands
• Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed? Single
• Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? No brothers/sisters
• What is your character's overall health like? Its good, he has a bad chest though.
• What type of personality does your character have? Hes nice but can get violent very quick, Loves to do sports and things that include moving.
• What is their Ethnic background and religion? Hes a Asian and is a Muslim but doesn't practice his religion much.
• What is their current occupation? Does whatever he can do to get cash, drug dealing, robbing people.
• What level of education does your character have? Secondary school education, stopped school at the age of 16.
• What does your character like or love? Loves making money and cars, also he likes to see his customers smile when he sells them product.
• What does your character dislike or hate? Hates people that give him dirty looks and hates haters.

Character Profiles (Charlie)

CHARACTER PROFILE QUESTIONS

• What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname? Charlie Rocker - Changed to Charlie Gambino when he was accepted in the Gambino family.(Preferred Charlie)
• How old is your character throughout the majority of the story? Early 20's
• What is their date of birth? 21/01/87
• What is their place of birth? Brooklyn, New York
• Are they male or female? Male
• Where do they live now? Lives in a big townhouse
• Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed? Widowed - Wife got murdered.
• Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? 1 Brother named Sebastian
• What is your character's overall health like? Healthy overall
• What type of personality does your character have? He likes to do practical stuff and doesnt like to stay in 1 place for long, hes always on the move, Hes smart and uses his brains against other people.
• What is their Ethnic background and religion? He is Italian 100% and is a strong believer in Catholicism.
• What is their current occupation? He is a mobster for the Gambino crime family.
• What level of education does your character have? He was at university for 2years doing a course being a lawyer, he dropped out when he had 6 months let.
• What does your character like or love? He loves money and his family, he loves fruits and vegetables.
• What does your character dislike or hate? He hates when people get in the way of what he is doing and he hates people who don't stay natural (botox, dying hair)

Breakdown Of Scenes

Scene 1 -
Sebastian kidnapped and being asked questions ..
Should be in a dark room, Drama class?

Scene 2 -
A guy snitches to the Mobster,
Snitch confronts Charlie in the toilet and tells him everything.

Scene 3 -
Charlie finds out his brother is kidnapped.
In a office, Looking smart, A teachers office?

Scene 4 -
Charlie goes to his stash and pays the snitch £20,000 for the information
In a rundown area?, No-ones there, maybe lanchester floor when no-ones there.

Scene 5 -
Charlie confronts both of the kidnappers and has a fist-fight.
Charlie wins.. maybe outside on the astro turf?

Scene 6 -
Idris gets killed while eating.. (knife)
Ali gets run over by a car, (special effects?)

What have I done? - 20/10/11

- Film treatment
- How to make my own blog and edit
- How to do a pre-production of a short film
- Finished 2 storylines
- Research on Al-Capone on what he did when he was younger and older

Mr Pyles Class only..

Scenes (The CLUB)

Story No.2

The CLUB

At the start of the movie, Idris is fighting for his life in the fight club owned by The boss, A buisnessman that deals in all sorts of stuff (Drug dealing, Arms dealing ect..), he never reveals his name to no-one, not even his family or his most trusted.
After Idris wins a fight, he gets a shot at leaving the fight club but he has to kill a police officier that is assigned to get information on The boss.
The coppers name is James Conoway (Zibanoor) and his Assistants name is David James (Joe).
Idris sets out to kill the copper, but then The boss finds out that the police officier is his son, So he goes and trys to find Idris, but when he finds him, His son James is dead and The assistant James Flee's from the scene.
The end.

Storyline

Storyline

At the start of the movie, Flash is low on money and confronts Bash at his house and says 'I need money, lets kidnap someone'
He replies saying 'I know a guys brother we can get, his big brothers from the mafia and hes loaded' 
1 brother named Sebastian has been kidnapped by 2 gang members  and they are wanting ransom, they ask Sebastian a lot of questions about his brother such as e.g. ‘where’s the safe?’ but Sebastian doesn’t reply and gets beat up for it.

They already know that Sebastian’s brother Charlie is a high ranked member in the mafia and has tons of money.

After Charlie finds out he goes on a quest to find his brother, after a few days of gathering information he is ready to take down the kidnappers, most of the information was given from a snitch that used to hang around with Flash he was also involved in the kidnapping but wanted to keep his identity sealed.

He got payed £20,000 for information on the people involved in the abduction.

Charlie goes to the place his brother was held up and has a fist fight with both of the kidnappers.

Sadly right at the end Charlie dies in the act of saving his brother.

A few days later a hit man kills Flash and Bash gets run over.

Starring –

Flash – Idris

Bash – Ali

Charlie – Zibanoor

Sebastian – Joe

Hit man - ?

Snitch - ?