Scene 1 -
Sebastian kidnapped and being asked questions ..
Should be in a dark room, Drama class?
Scene 2 -
A guy snitches to the Mobster,
Snitch confronts Charlie in the toilet and tells him everything.
Scene 3 -
Charlie finds out his brother is kidnapped.
In a office, Looking smart, A teachers office?
Scene 4 -
Charlie goes to his stash and pays the snitch £20,000 for the information
In a rundown area?, No-ones there, maybe lanchester floor when no-ones there.
Scene 5 -
Charlie confronts both of the kidnappers and has a fist-fight.
Charlie wins.. maybe outside on the astro turf?
Scene 6 -
Idris gets killed while eating.. (knife)
Ali gets run over by a car, (special effects?)
Good scene breakdown, next you need to add the scene headings and locations for each scene. Think about camera angles and the mise-en-scene as well (you have started this already).
ReplyDeleteWell worked!