It has a lot of detail and its saying whats around the place.
It says what shot its doing at the start of each paragraph.
At the start it says EXT/INT (Inside or outside) and The time of day, DAY/EVENING/NIGHT and Finally the place where its happening so example: INT. HOSPITAL CORRIDOR -- NIGHT.
Ali, you can do much better than this. You have not mentioned the name of the script you were looking at, which is a shame as you have used an example from the script to illustrate a point.
ReplyDeleteYou also need to relate what you have seen to how you will be writing your own script.