The CLUB
At the start of the movie, Idris is fighting for his life in the fight club owned by The boss, A buisnessman that deals in all sorts of stuff (Drug dealing, Arms dealing ect..), he never reveals his name to no-one, not even his family or his most trusted.
After Idris wins a fight, he gets a shot at leaving the fight club but he has to kill a police officier that is assigned to get information on The boss.
The coppers name is James Conoway (Zibanoor) and his Assistants name is David James (Joe).
Idris sets out to kill the copper, but then The boss finds out that the police officier is his son, So he goes and trys to find Idris, but when he finds him, His son James is dead and The assistant James Flee's from the scene.
The end.
This is much better, well done for coming up with a seperate story. Again, good to have thought about characters and kept the cast small and sensible.
ReplyDeleteNext you need to break the scenes down locationally, using the scene headings to be found on my Blogger page.